Observer or participant?

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An interesting question came up last week while I helped my daughter proof read a critique for English class. When you read a book do you watch it unfold around you as though you are an invisible participant or do you become one of the main characters so that everything happens directly to you? To be honest, prior to helping her I hadn’t thought about how perspective influences how I think and feel about the books I read. I had to stop and think about how I mentally process books while I read.

I’ve polled everyone in my extended family since we’re all voracious readers. Everyone told me their perspective depends on the author and also specific books if we’re talking about multiple works by the same person. Most novels unfold around the reader, as if you are the proverbial fly on the wall watching (but not directly participating in) the action. A select few novels have that magic something which enables the reader to become an integrated part of the story, in other words the reader feels like everything happens to them. At least that’s what my very small and unscientific poll came up with.

Specifically thinking about romances, which category do you fall into, observer or participant? Think about the books on your keeper shelves, did the observer/participant question make a difference in your decision making process? Does setting influence how you read a book? What about time period? If you are a character oriented reader, which character most influences your ability to submerge yourself, hero or heroine? Are you always one or the other (observer or participant)? Does point of view, meaning first person or third person, affect your perspective?

Personally, I nearly always fall into the ‘fly on the wall’ observer category. I rarely feel like a direct participant in the narrative. I’m sure it’s probably just the way my mind works, but there have been very few books where I became one with the characters and action unfolding around me. That’s not to say I’m emotionally uninvolved with my books. I often have to read with a box of tissues at hand (just in case) and I’m known to rant and rave at unsuspecting family members when a character or event annoys me.

As to keeper books, the observer/participant question wasn’t a conscious factor at the time I decided if I wanted to keep them. Looking over them quickly, they all grabbed me by the heartstrings somehow, but none of them made me feel like I was participating in the story. How books achieve ‘keeper status’ is another post all by itself, lol. Setting and time period haven’t made a difference, although contemporary settings seem to bring out my inner critic faster, and if I’m critiquing than I’m not fully involved either as observer or participant.

Characterization is most likely to help me feel like I’m the one everything is happening to. If I identify strongly with the heroine or if I really, really want the hero all to myself I’m most likely to feel fully in the action. The opposite is true too though. If I dislike either the hero or the heroine for whatever reason, I’m less likely to be a participant (and less likely to finish the book at all).

I’m sure I’ve left a lot of things out, but I hope I’ve given you a little food for thought today. Which one are you, observer or participant?

6 Responses to “Observer or participant?”

  1. Interesting question. I agree that characterization is key to how I react to the work but I don’t think I ever become the character. Instead I feel more like the character’s shadow, always with the character and experiencing everything but not the actual character.

    by Georgie Lee on November 29th, 2007 at 2:13 pm

  2. I’m definitely the ‘fly on the wall’ reader. The closest I ever feel to actually being in a story is like I wish I knew the characters personally, like they were a member of my family or best friend. I can’t remember a time when I put myself in the place of a character…exactly. Empathize sure, but not in their shoes.

    by Rosie on November 30th, 2007 at 12:21 am

  3. I’m the same way - it’s like watching a film in my head so I’m more like a voyeur than anything.

    I do know that For My Lady’s Heart by Laura Kinsale made me feel like I should be in a world where they spoke like that. I wasn’t the heroine but when you come out of a great read, you are bewildered by real life.

    Another book was Suzanne Brockmann’s Gone Too Far with Sam and Alyssa - for about a week afterwards I swore constantly like Sam. I was so into the cadence of the book that sentences didn’t sound right if not filtered through Sam’s world.

    CindyS

    by CindyS on December 1st, 2007 at 5:26 am

  4. Really interesting question, and not something I’ve actively thought about. I am definitely an observer. I want to be swept away by their story, not in it. But that’s why I like good characterization. I don’t want to be the heroine, but I’d like to understand her and her motivation.

    by Devon on December 2nd, 2007 at 5:50 pm

  5. A few years ago, someone on AAR explained that there were subjective and objective readers. IIRC the objective reader was the one who observed the action from the outside, while the subjective reader was involved in the story, often by adopting the POV of a character. I’m definitely an objective reader, but sometimes I wonder if I were a subjective reader would more books work for me. In other words, if I was more personally involved in the story, would I be less likely to feel bored or frustrated with certain books.

    by Robin on December 2nd, 2007 at 6:34 pm

  6. Georgie Lee~ I have only felt like I was the heroine in one book, and that is because I’d been through nearly identical experiences. I felt as though I was the template from which the heroine had been drawn. It has never happened again and I don’t have much hope that it ever will.

    Rosie~ If the trend remains true it seems as though most readers fall into the “fly on the wall” category. Perhaps observing is the norm, but it simply could be that the nuances have to be excatly perfect for the reader to become a participant. And we all know how hard it is for everything to be exactly perfect once, never mind every time we attempt something.

    CindyS~ I often feel as though I’m watching a movie too- sometimes being a voyeur can be embarrassing!

    Devon~I too hope to understand the characters and their motivation- maybe I’m becoming more cynical in my old age and that’s why it’s harder for me to be swept away so often.

    JMC~ I guess I’m in the objective category too. I agree that subjectivity would be more likely to increase my enjoyment of what I read, but I haven’t been able to figure out how to turn the corner from one to another.

    by Amanda on December 2nd, 2007 at 7:55 pm

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